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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 9:16:07 PM Title: Run For Your Life If You Can, Little Girl

i loved how she said his name Jimmy...and he didn't even know it. but we do!

i love how now that Origins has come out we can weave pieces of it into Rogan's previous histories as we write.

that was an elegant and simple way to do it. good job!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 9:06:27 PM Title: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

i loooooove the motorcycling/flying!

i've done something similar on my ex's bike. IT IS A RUSH LIKE NO OTHER!

whooo, hot stuff!

Author's Response: hehe thank youu :) I'll really have to try that some time...*off to find person with motorcycle* -- too bad I'm terribly afraid of even sitting on the back of a motorbike lol

Reviewer: Obsidian Sins Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 7:07:05 PM Title: Girl Who Dries Your Tears When They're Falling

Poor Logan. Man, reading the summary of what happened in Origins made my heart ache all over again. But at least he has Marie to help him cope! Update soon.

Author's Response: I felt really bad for Logan too. it was difficult to write his reaction appropriately, because it's all so intense...but yeah, Marie is there to hug+help :)

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 8:24:28 PM Title: All That I Have To Give And More

Awesomness dipped in chocolate, coated in sprinkles. This was great! Absoutely great! I'm really exited for whatever you have next, although I'm pretty sure that its the mission coming up. *grins* I can't wait until you put up some more!

Author's Response: oh goodness, you have commented on all my chapters - you're my hero, girl! ;) seriously, thanks so much for taking the time to do that, it means a lot to me.rni'm glad you've been enjoying the story, "awesomeness dipped in chocolate" is one of the nices things i've been told about my writing, hehe ;)rnas for a beta..no, i don't have one, but i keep thinking that maybe i should find one...i don't know...i guess i'm a little scared of having the flaws and mistakes of my stories pointed out to me, but that's just silly, because someone has to do it...so, yeah, i guess you're right, i should go looking for a beta reader.rnhaha, and scott just turned into the biggest jerk in this story, i don't know why...it's easy to write him as a dick ^^ however, i'm starting to feel bad about that because i've recently discovered my (extremely well-hidden!) liking for scotty...but i can save that for another story ;)rnand the whole bond thing...no idea how that happened actually, but i'm glad that the explanation worked for you and that it didn't seem too far out there...it was partly inspired by bobby and john (halfway through the story, i discovered my not-so-well-hidden love for those two as well, but only when they're together/as BFFs)rnit'll actually take some time until the mission starts, they've got some other stuff to work through first...*cough*x-men origins*cough*rni'll post the next chapter soon and i hope you'll like what's to come as well. rnagain, thanks for the extensive commenting, it made me veeeery happy! :)

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 4:17:58 PM Title: When I Am With You I Feel Flames Again

Ahh, i see you've adressed the bond.. Coolies. *grins*

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 3:13:32 PM Title: She Lives On Disillusion Road

"It's like my head is full of zip-archives, that's kind of fun.”



Youha me laughing out loud and my hubby looking at me like I was stupid with that line!



Great stuff so far!

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 11:04:14 AM Title: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

It worked really well, you did a great job of explaining what she felt when she was realizing her freedom. Also, great stuff! Awesomeness completly!

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 10:36:05 AM Title: Hanging All Her Hopes On The Stars

Hmmm, I'm trying to figure out the bond, the connection that they've got going, and how it's manifesting on a physical level. It this what happens with prolonged repeated contact to Maries skin, or is it specific to them alone. It's an intresting avenue to explore, and I hope that your MArie learns to control her powers. *grins* I think it'd be great. And Hmm... Love it! Off to next chapter.

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2009 9:53:30 PM Title: They Call Her Mississippi

Heh, this doesn't have to be one of those, Scott's-not-so-bad-a-guy fics. He's still a good read when he's being an ass. *grins*

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2009 9:26:38 PM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression

This is great! I'm off to read the rest you've got! I really enjoy what you're doing with this, and I'm eager to see what happens next. The best thinng for you right now, is a good beta. Find one of those, (you may already have one) and you're set. Use them to bounce ideas off of, run them through the paces and ask for their advice on things like words flow and plot. You're doing great, but even the best of us have room for improvment. Learn from yourself, and write for no one but yourself. *grins*

Reviewer: Rogue1189 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2009 2:01:27 PM Title: She Lives On Disillusion Road

Lady I have been gone too long!

Not reading stories for almost a month was horrible! Where do I get my Rogan fix???? And also just to let you know I got ur email but it was hiding in my spam folder and by the time I even got to read it a little computer bug decided to recreate Armageddon in the hard drive *growls* computers can be so frickin annoying

Now onto your story!

Your writing is getting soooo good! I'm seriously jealous. And I love how you turned the train scene into something more. And including Origins in here was AWESOME!!! When will we see Rogue give him some of his past. OH and what about Kayla??? ohhhhh the possibilities!

Author's Response: oh heyyy good to see you back here! I'd started wondering if you'd found your personal Logan and spontaneously departed for a wedding in Vegas and a month-long honeymoon or something...not that that would necessarily be a bad thing then, lol. rnsorry bout your computer bug, those really suck *sigh*...but everything's back to ok now, right?rnwell thanks for the praise *blushes* I'm pretty excited about getting Origins in there myself, I just hope I'm not wasting any of the potential. they'll get to talking about it in a few chapters, after digging through all the crap at hand lol

Reviewer: New Moon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2009 10:50:11 AM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression

Just as an FYI, the age of consent here in New York is 17. ::wink:: Scott can shove it that much sooner! LOL

Author's Response: ohh is it? well that's convenient isn't it ;) rnI was sure it was 18. thanks for the correction :)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 8:08:01 PM Title: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

I think the motorcycle scene worked great. You allowed us to discover what he wanted her to do just like she did. I liked the dinner scene as well

Author's Response: that's great to hear, thank you! =)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2009 10:12:48 PM Title: Hanging All Her Hopes On The Stars

I really like what you are doing with this story.

Author's Response: thanks! i hope you'll like the future chapters too :)

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2009 6:42:36 PM Title: Hanging All Her Hopes On The Stars

Love it so far. :)

Author's Response: yay thank you :)

Reviewer: Obsidian Sins Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 2:07:15 AM Title: They Call Her Mississippi

It's so sweet! Logan's gruff affection for Rogue, Rogue's timid strength. I can't wait to see where you take it! Update soon.

Author's Response: thank you :) I'm trying really hard to get "both sides of the story" in there, so to speak, thus the switching POVs. I'm glad you like it and that it's not too confusing or anything :)

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 11:53:57 PM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression

I have to say I loved the way you took the actual events and tweaked them just enough. I suspect that this is what all us shippes pictured during that scene anyway. Well done!

Author's Response: thank you =)
I just couldn't get over it...he didn't kiss her when he had the perfect chance...! ^^

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 9:58:07 PM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression

Very nice!

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 5:27:05 PM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression

I like the way this was written. I think it is a very nice AU story, even though I usually don;t go for AU. Please continue!

Author's Response: thank you :) and there is more to come soon
one thing I have to say; I've never really understood what AU means on this site...I thought it only applied to no-powers / normal-world type of stories? Stamp of Approval, for example

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 3:37:26 PM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression

It was a cute way of changing the scene from the film!

Only one thing...I kinda laughed when Logan described her eyes as 'Bambi eyes'. It would imply he's seen Bambi...and just the thought of that...LOL!

Author's Response: *gasp* I didn't even think about that LOL ...he probably hasn't seen Bambi though ;) maybe he's seen a poster of it somewhere... ^^

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