Reviews For The Wanting Time
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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2013 8:46:59 AM Title: Touch

This is one of the best stories on this site that I have ever read! It encompasses ALL of the best elements of a Rogan story. Great job.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2013 8:35:14 AM Title: Touch

Was drawn to this by a fic reccomendation - what an incredibly sexy fic. Definitely got me all hot and bothered. Very very nice!!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2013 11:53:50 AM Title: Touch

Wow, wow, wow! Cold shower inducing story right here! Loved reading this. Wish there had been more so could have seen all the kinds of fits the rest of the xmen would have thrown!!

Reviewer: pleasuremaiden Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2012 3:18:12 AM Title: Touch

Awesome story..seriously loved the way your portrayed their relationship. Thanks sooo much for sharing :)

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 12:25:32 AM Title: Touch

I am mush....a pile of mush...Instincts in their purest form calling out to each other...This is genius...Makes me wish I had a man...

Basically, I can't string something constructive together right now because I'm too emotionally overwhelmed (in a good way).

Definitely enjoyed this and it has gone into my favs so that I can read again and again.

Thanks,
-Pepper

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 12:10:32 AM Title: Sight

Kitty & Jubes' takes were awesome.

And the hotness continues. This is totally epic! Saying I love it would not do it justice.

Ever been to Cold Stone Creamery? The sizes there are "Like it," "Love it," and "Gotta have it." Well, the sentiment behind "Gotta have it" reflects my thoughts.

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 12:00:34 AM Title: Taste

You're killing me woman!

In other words, I like it. Sex without touching has never been that HOT!!!

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2011 11:51:38 PM Title: Hearing

"Tell me how"....indeed.

I do see the potential squick...but come on...Marie and Logan...in a sense they are fucked up so that they follow a code unto themselves.

The tension...the emotion...it packs a sensually hot punch!

Clicking that next button NOW!

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2011 11:44:31 PM Title: Scent

Hell yeah, he better stay!

I love your description of Logan's raw, primal need...her scent.

You got him down -- from the way he avoids her to attempting an explanation -- to a fucking T!!

Love it! Off to read more.
-Pepper

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2011 6:14:30 AM Title: Touch

very nice!!

Reviewer: Mae Stark Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2011 11:31:39 PM Title: Scent

Oh my gosh-
This is your fic? I read it a while ago, but I had no idea you had written it.
Well. I love this one, too.

Reviewer: Anonymous2004 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2011 8:19:06 PM Title: Touch

Oh...wow. Good golly, all around, I say! Exquisite.

Reviewer: thatcraftykid Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2011 12:36:21 PM Title: Touch

This story, beyond being totally hot rough and ready smut-fluff, is so well-crafted! I love the focus on each of the senses, and the way the "wanting time" weaves throughout.

Reviewer: jnet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 4:21:54 AM Title: Touch

MMM my favorite, hawt perviness ending with sweet and fluffy. Excellent story.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2011 7:51:20 AM Title: Touch

Let me address the last first -- the last paragraph, that is. Rarely have I read a more beautifully crafted conclusion to a multi-chapter fic. And the very last line literally wraps the title right in with all five chapters. Outstanding.

I love her explanation for what 'the wanting time' was -- their instincts pushing them to break free of the restrictions placed on them, whether by others or by themselves.

You are mine for as long as you want to be. And I’m facing the fact that I’m probably gonna be yours a lot longer than that. He's handing her his heart for eternity, even though he knows there's a chance -- however slim -- that sometime sooner than that she may not want him anymore. And then there's the fact that he will surely outlive her and spend the rest of eternity alone and the wanting time will go on and on and on... Knowing all that, this just might be the bravest thing he's ever done.

If I haven't done it already, this one is going in the faves. --Wendie

Author's Response: I was pretty happy with that conclusion. I actually wrote it before I started the rest of Chapter 5, because I wanted "touch" to be less obvious than most would assume, but wanted to leave that free for the future. And I like wrapping things up, but not tying them in a bow, if you know what I mean. Re Logan's line, I suspect I might have to revisit that at some point in the future. It is a bit tantalising. Thank you for the wonderful reviews and I'm so glad you've enjoyed this.

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2011 11:22:07 PM Title: Touch

Loved it. Over too soon, but loved it none the less.

Author's Response: Sorry if you wanted more, but really, this just started out as some dirty talk, and ended up about four chapters longer than I expected! And I really, really wanted to end it on a happy, resolved note. Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Sidfictishous Signed star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2011 11:42:01 PM Title: Touch

This was a very interesting read and I must say it was pretty hot, too. In my mind I just skipped the age thing and went from there. Nicely handled and decidedly sexy plot.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not sure "plot" is the right description, though - "thin pretext for much smut" might be more accurate ;)

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2011 12:43:28 PM Title: Touch

THIS was absol-f'n-lutely EPIC!!

(gads but I'd love to be more eloquent in my review, but day-ammmm that's the INSTINCT...that's what my brain is screming out!!)

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Instinct is what it's all about, after all!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 5:09:35 PM Title: Touch

Soooooooooooooooooooo HOTTTTTT!!!

...and then the last parts just... aaawwwww.

You sure there won't be a sequel ;)

Author's Response: Now, you see, I've stopped promising sequels because I don't like disappointing people. New stories are more fun, I think. Besides, I'm not sure there's much room left for *cough* plot development in this one. Maybe.

Reviewer: skybound2 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 9:31:21 AM Title: Touch

*happy swoon* I think, like others have said, that this line: "You are mine for as long as you want to be. And I’m facing the fact that I’m probably gonna be yours a lot longer than that." Really sold the entire chapter, and helped make this ending just amazing. So honest, and romantic, and yet I can really hear Logan saying it. Excellent work on this.

Author's Response: Amazing what a throwaway line can do for you. That was a last minute revision when I wanted to up the dialogue factor a little, and make it not just about relinquishing control, but about a decision they make. Since I had already set the feel of the scene, the dialogue just fell into place. Goes to show ... revisions are good!

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 8:37:29 AM Title: Touch

Hope you are cuddled up with your *men*, SkyblueRae! – not sure if this was a typo or not but all I thought was lucky lucky girl bet she’s having a damn better valentine’s day than everyone else!!

‘You are mine for as long as you want to be. And I’m facing the fact that I’m probably gonna be yours a lot longer than that.” Absolutely love this line, despite the fact that here we have what I class as more realistic, base driven sex/vocab you throw in what has to be the most romantic line! Loved Marie in this chapter, I prefer despite her lack of experience seeing her stronger more mature like this and not so much of a child when it comes to sex as is often depicted. Just for the record you nailed the ending of this too - gold stars all round!

Thoroughly enjoyed this well done x

Author's Response: Poor Sky! I didn't mean to defame her character ... she has two men quite legitmately, but one is quite young ;) I did think hard about how to write her sexually, being so young; but if I wrote her as being young in behaviour, then I really wouldn't have been comfortable with that. I also wanted to get across some degree of compulsion ... being pushed beyond usual limits. And I'm very glad you liked the ending ... I wrote it before the beginning of the chapter and was quite fond of it myself ;)

Reviewer: wudelfin Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 6:35:24 AM Title: Touch

now that's an ending!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: Melancholy Rogue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2011 5:02:11 PM Title: Touch

"You are mine for as long as you want to be. And I’m facing the fact that I’m probably gonna be yours a lot longer than that.”

I absolutely LOVE that line. I adored this story and it totally made me smile. ;)

Author's Response: So glad you liked it - the story, and the line. As I said, it was a last minute inclusion that certainly seemed to strike a chord!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2011 5:50:07 PM Title: Sight

Oh...oh...oh...what you do to me...and as hot! and sweaty! and did I mention hot! as this was, my favorite part was when he kissed her eyelids and shared his feelings and promised her 'together'. *swoon* --Wendie

Author's Response: Lots more of the sweet stuff to come in the next chapter ... so glad you are enjoying it. I'll actually been reading some of your recs and think we might have very similar tastes. Besides Rogan, of course!

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 1:50:57 PM Title: Sight

G&T’s and Axl Rose are herby given special thanks because they seem to work really well for you!


I’m raising my hand with skybound2, agreeing to everything bima140277/ jenniferjwva/ White Dove and Oracle13 said, and just like Entropy I’m adding lots of stars.


Pardon the pun but keep it coming!!


Hope your parents are ok x

Author's Response: They are fine - Cyclone eased up as it crossed the Divide, so it was "only" Cat 3 when it got to them. Apparently we didn't like those trees, anyway. Just lots of nervous energy expended worrying when I could have been writing. G&T's and Axl are my cures for anything and everything! I need to songfic next, I think ...

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