*fans self* Holy hell, is it hot in here?

I'd love to give you a coherent review. Honest I would. But I'm afraid I've melted into the floor, and am unable to form decent sentences. Suffice it to say that I am ENTHRALLED by this travel through the senses you have us going through. And we haven't even gotten to sight or touch yet. *swoons*

Author's Response: Enthralled is nice. So nice, in fact, I may have to steal it at some point. And swooning. I love it when they swoon :D

Scent, hearing and taste so far, sight and touch to come? As readers we certainly got an eyeful - Me thinks sight was pretty much covered by the taste chapter :) I know I’m going to enjoy being proved wrong on that one though!

I still felt there was a slight vulnerability to start on Logan’s part – knowing he’s been staying away for a reason and knowing that this turning point will change everything because ‘this’ is so different.

Once he let loose I loved the coarse, raw, edgy feel to him, brimming over with self-confidence yet I didn’t find him arrogant. Marie is inexperienced yes but very far from innocent and as far as I can tell and if she’s got any sense, enjoying every minute of it! Bloody good to read! No hearts and flowers and yet there is! So much hotter than the written vanilla we see over and over and they haven’t actually even got very far yet!

I assure you we’re all now very impatiently waiting for the next part x

Author's Response: Sorry I didn't get to this earlier - I try to stay away from WRFA a bit when I'm actively writing as I want to stay in my own world a bit ikywim. I wanted to comment on the senses theme - I'm kicking myself a bit that I used that device now; it was a bit of a flippant attempt to have cute chapter titles and I haven't taken the time to do proper justice to the possibilities of it. I give full permission for anyone else to try and do better - this story is REALLY about mechanism of wanting, and how our bodies know us better than we know ourselves. (And how do I know that? Because I just wrote the end of the whole thing! Kaching!)

Oh. My. God.

You, are a erotic-writing genius. Or God. What ever sounds better to you XD

And you could definitely make a shit load of money publishing somethin' like this. If you already have something published, whether it be porn or naught, can you tell me where I can find it!? 'Cause I really like your writing style in general. You are amazing!

Anyways, I haveta clean the drool from my keyboard, but please please continue this!!!

-- Wolf

Author's Response: I've never had any fiction published ... it's on my to do list, but editing my novel isn't nearly as exciting as writing fanfic! And strangely, I have been pondering the erotic fiction market as possibly being easier to crack than the mainstream/romance markets. Maybe I'll have to research it further. I presume you've found my other fics at WRFA; I also have a few more bits and pieces on my LJ (jaq-of-spades.livejournal.com) when I meddle in other fandoms. I've written a Logan/Faith piece that I love and plan to upload soonish as part of my Fandom Multiverse. Feel free to friend me!

very very descriptive, me likey

Author's Response: Yes, Logan is rather good, isn't he! Glad you're enjoying it.

>GAH< I'm fanning myself like Granny when she's sneakin' a peek at the men's underwear section of the Sear's catalog!

Holy Mother of God, I do LOVE a woman who keeps her promises! Drivel? Not on your life...Porn? Definitely. Grade A, 100 percent, WRFA prime porn. And if your soul is gonna burn for writing it, then mine will surely roast not only for enjoying it, but for wishing I had your gift for it. If this is a trip through the five senses, what's next? --Wendie

Author's Response: I'm glad Granny approves :D Up next is sight ... but the question is, who's seeing what? *evil chuckle*

*eyes boyfriend*

*grins lasciviously*

*...*

Author's Response: Have fun? *raises eyebrow*