Reviews For The Wanting Time
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Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 12:10:32 AM Title: Sight

Kitty & Jubes' takes were awesome.

And the hotness continues. This is totally epic! Saying I love it would not do it justice.

Ever been to Cold Stone Creamery? The sizes there are "Like it," "Love it," and "Gotta have it." Well, the sentiment behind "Gotta have it" reflects my thoughts.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2011 5:50:07 PM Title: Sight

Oh...oh...oh...what you do to me...and as hot! and sweaty! and did I mention hot! as this was, my favorite part was when he kissed her eyelids and shared his feelings and promised her 'together'. *swoon* --Wendie

Author's Response: Lots more of the sweet stuff to come in the next chapter ... so glad you are enjoying it. I'll actually been reading some of your recs and think we might have very similar tastes. Besides Rogan, of course!

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 1:50:57 PM Title: Sight

G&T’s and Axl Rose are herby given special thanks because they seem to work really well for you!


I’m raising my hand with skybound2, agreeing to everything bima140277/ jenniferjwva/ White Dove and Oracle13 said, and just like Entropy I’m adding lots of stars.


Pardon the pun but keep it coming!!


Hope your parents are ok x

Author's Response: They are fine - Cyclone eased up as it crossed the Divide, so it was "only" Cat 3 when it got to them. Apparently we didn't like those trees, anyway. Just lots of nervous energy expended worrying when I could have been writing. G&T's and Axl are my cures for anything and everything! I need to songfic next, I think ...

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 8:59:58 AM Title: Sight

Wow, this story is smokin' hot. I think my brain shorted out.

Author's Response: You might need to rewire it for the next chapter. Perhaps I need to be more specific about my warnings: SEX. SEX. SEX. DO NOT READ WHILE OPERATING HEAVY MACHINERY OR IN A HOSPITAL ENVIRONMENT. ELECTRICAL DISTURBANCE MAY OCCUR. ;)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 1:34:15 AM Title: Sight

Nice. Every chapter is better and better! great job! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Not long now! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2011 6:05:05 PM Title: Sight

*drolls*

Can't wait for the next chapter and I'm totally ignoring the 'final' thing ;)

Author's Response: I've just written the magical word "fin" so am pretty sure that it is final. For once, I don't think it needs a sequel, either ... perfectly self contained piece of fluff. (Red velvet fluff, but fluff none the same.)

Reviewer: skybound2 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2011 4:56:46 PM Title: Sight

Raise your hand if you just sat down and re-read this thing from the beginning, because it is just that DAMN GOOD. *raises hand*

I did NOT expect them to get caught so soon, and HOLY HELL what a way for them to be caught (poor Kitty! I imagine she is traumatized for life!)

The 'snuggling' scene was perfect. So much warmth in just a few words, following so much heat. I LOVE that he let her absorb a bit of him, not once, but TWICE. And the picture you painted of them in combat class, with him stumbling at the end, was bot hot and adorable.

Author's Response: Thank you maam. I hope the chapters hang together read all in one go, as I don't write them like that. Something I never thought of before. *ponders* I'm not sure I expected them to get caught so soon, but when I was thinking of "sight" I thought of how they were perceived by others, and Kitty seemed to be the most likely victim. I'm like "get over it girl, go back for a GOOD look," but she wasn't up for cooperating. Glad you liked the warmth/snuggle part; my primary aim for this story was for their bond to take them to a good place, a positive place.

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