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Date: 02/10/2011 8:59:58 AM Title: Sight
Wow, this story is smokin' hot. I think my brain shorted out.
Author's Response: You might need to rewire it for the next chapter. Perhaps I need to be more specific about my warnings: SEX. SEX. SEX. DO NOT READ WHILE OPERATING HEAVY MACHINERY OR IN A HOSPITAL ENVIRONMENT. ELECTRICAL DISTURBANCE MAY OCCUR. ;)
Date: 02/10/2011 1:34:15 AM Title: Sight
Nice. Every chapter is better and better! great job! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Not long now! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2011 9:39:02 PM Title: Scent
No words. Just stars.
Author's Response: Thank you. Stars are good - I'll happily take stars!
Date: 02/09/2011 6:05:05 PM Title: Sight
*drolls*
Can't wait for the next chapter and I'm totally ignoring the 'final' thing ;)
Author's Response: I've just written the magical word "fin" so am pretty sure that it is final. For once, I don't think it needs a sequel, either ... perfectly self contained piece of fluff. (Red velvet fluff, but fluff none the same.)
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2011 4:56:46 PM Title: Sight
Raise your hand if you just sat down and re-read this thing from the beginning, because it is just that DAMN GOOD. *raises hand*
I did NOT expect them to get caught so soon, and HOLY HELL what a way for them to be caught (poor Kitty! I imagine she is traumatized for life!)
The 'snuggling' scene was perfect. So much warmth in just a few words, following so much heat. I LOVE that he let her absorb a bit of him, not once, but TWICE. And the picture you painted of them in combat class, with him stumbling at the end, was bot hot and adorable.
Author's Response: Thank you maam. I hope the chapters hang together read all in one go, as I don't write them like that. Something I never thought of before. *ponders* I'm not sure I expected them to get caught so soon, but when I was thinking of "sight" I thought of how they were perceived by others, and Kitty seemed to be the most likely victim. I'm like "get over it girl, go back for a GOOD look," but she wasn't up for cooperating. Glad you liked the warmth/snuggle part; my primary aim for this story was for their bond to take them to a good place, a positive place.
Date: 01/31/2011 9:29:01 AM Title: Taste
*fans self* Holy hell, is it hot in here?
I'd love to give you a coherent review. Honest I would. But I'm afraid I've melted into the floor, and am unable to form decent sentences. Suffice it to say that I am ENTHRALLED by this travel through the senses you have us going through. And we haven't even gotten to sight or touch yet. *swoons*
Author's Response: Enthralled is nice. So nice, in fact, I may have to steal it at some point. And swooning. I love it when they swoon :D
Date: 01/28/2011 9:49:10 PM Title: Taste
I think this might be my new favorite piece of smut. It is great to see you back. "The Bargin" and your others were some of the first W/R that I read. It is still some of my favorites. You have been missed.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I would love to write more regularly, but real life has a way of catching me up. I love it when I get reviews on older stories, it gives me a new thrill every time!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2011 6:21:55 PM Title: Scent
So hot /faints/
Author's Response: Hope the next chapter was able to bring you around!
Date: 01/28/2011 12:28:57 PM Title: Taste
Scent, hearing and taste so far, sight and touch to come? As readers we certainly got an eyeful - Me thinks sight was pretty much covered by the taste chapter :) I know I’m going to enjoy being proved wrong on that one though!
I still felt there was a slight vulnerability to start on Logan’s part – knowing he’s been staying away for a reason and knowing that this turning point will change everything because ‘this’ is so different.
Once he let loose I loved the coarse, raw, edgy feel to him, brimming over with self-confidence yet I didn’t find him arrogant. Marie is inexperienced yes but very far from innocent and as far as I can tell and if she’s got any sense, enjoying every minute of it! Bloody good to read! No hearts and flowers and yet there is! So much hotter than the written vanilla we see over and over and they haven’t actually even got very far yet!
I assure you we’re all now very impatiently waiting for the next part x
Author's Response: Sorry I didn't get to this earlier - I try to stay away from WRFA a bit when I'm actively writing as I want to stay in my own world a bit ikywim. I wanted to comment on the senses theme - I'm kicking myself a bit that I used that device now; it was a bit of a flippant attempt to have cute chapter titles and I haven't taken the time to do proper justice to the possibilities of it. I give full permission for anyone else to try and do better - this story is REALLY about mechanism of wanting, and how our bodies know us better than we know ourselves. (And how do I know that? Because I just wrote the end of the whole thing! Kaching!)
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2011 5:16:37 AM Title: Taste
love it xXx
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2011 6:17:20 PM Title: Taste
Oh. My. God.
You, are a erotic-writing genius. Or God. What ever sounds better to you XD
And you could definitely make a shit load of money publishing somethin' like this. If you already have something published, whether it be porn or naught, can you tell me where I can find it!? 'Cause I really like your writing style in general. You are amazing!
Anyways, I haveta clean the drool from my keyboard, but please please continue this!!!
-- Wolf
Author's Response: I've never had any fiction published ... it's on my to do list, but editing my novel isn't nearly as exciting as writing fanfic! And strangely, I have been pondering the erotic fiction market as possibly being easier to crack than the mainstream/romance markets. Maybe I'll have to research it further. I presume you've found my other fics at WRFA; I also have a few more bits and pieces on my LJ (jaq-of-spades.livejournal.com) when I meddle in other fandoms. I've written a Logan/Faith piece that I love and plan to upload soonish as part of my Fandom Multiverse. Feel free to friend me!
Date: 01/27/2011 3:33:30 PM Title: Taste
wow... this is really hot. They are just so hot together even if they haven't been "together" yet.
Author's Response: I think that's part of what I was exploring, really. What does "together" mean? What IS sex? They're going to have fun finding out ...
Date: 01/27/2011 12:09:15 AM Title: Taste
very very descriptive, me likey
Author's Response: Yes, Logan is rather good, isn't he! Glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2011 8:46:29 PM Title: Taste
Wow! Just Wow!!!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2011 7:23:34 PM Title: Taste
>GAH< I'm fanning myself like Granny when she's sneakin' a peek at the men's underwear section of the Sear's catalog!
Holy Mother of God, I do LOVE a woman who keeps her promises! Drivel? Not on your life...Porn? Definitely. Grade A, 100 percent, WRFA prime porn. And if your soul is gonna burn for writing it, then mine will surely roast not only for enjoying it, but for wishing I had your gift for it. If this is a trip through the five senses, what's next? --Wendie
Author's Response: I'm glad Granny approves :D Up next is sight ... but the question is, who's seeing what? *evil chuckle*
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2011 6:39:04 PM Title: Taste
Goddamn! Thats was like the hottest thing Ive read in a long long time, keep it going!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it - I certainly had fun writing it! Next chapter will give us a bit of breathing space, though!
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2011 5:45:58 PM Title: Taste
*eyes boyfriend*
*grins lasciviously*
*...*
Author's Response: Have fun? *raises eyebrow*
Date: 01/26/2011 4:38:37 PM Title: Scent
My goodness do you ever know how to write! lol That was extremely hot! I was right in the middle of Logan telling her what he would be doing and my dang power went out! (we're in the middle of receiving about 12 inches of snow and the power lines are not happy about it) Thankfully it came back on a minute or so later and I was able to get right back to where I was reading. lol Whew! That was some chapter. ;)
Author's Response: I can just imagine your horror as the screen flickered! Weird to think of you in snowstorms while I've got the aircon on ... but that's the southern hemisphere for you. Glad you enjoyed it - maybe I helped keep you warm!
Date: 01/26/2011 12:15:08 AM Title: Hearing
underage smunderage who cares
lol
Author's Response: Apparently not many at WRFA! Glad you are enjoying :D
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2011 5:37:45 AM Title: Scent
Ok so where to start…..…..wow I think about sums it up! I have had to pick out some lines for their sheer power and depth, my dear you have one hell of a way with words!
‘hanging over an abyss. Cut him free of his honour, or truss him tight with lies?’
‘The one they called Wolverine. But just like the Rogue, he was a chimera built by a million false assumptions and ill-considered expectations.’
‘She hadn’t been the only one crucified by this charade.’
So many times it’s the other way around but I love that its Wolverine and Rogue hiding the truth and Logan and Marie now fighting for it. As for the rest......well I refer to my first thought of wow! The only word I had a problem with is ‘titties’ which to me is a very childish word used [and accompanied by sniggers] by boys not old enough to see let alone know what to do with! but that may well be depending on where in the world you’re from!
‘those who object to a sexually charged relationship between a teenager and an older man’ – not me! I married my older man 20 years ago! And the age of consent is 16 here, I hate fics where they make out its wrong at 17/18 even 19. Go for it!!
Author's Response: You get the bingo ... my absolutest favoritest line in the fic so far ... Cut him free of his honour, or truss him tight with lies. Not just does it sound good (modest!), but it sums up the entire dilemma at the core of this piece: Logan's image of himself is at odds with what he wants for himself, because he has built that image to other people's expectations. Ditto the next line you've quoted, my second favourite. And yes, I thought hard about whether to make the 'real' personalities Marie and Logan, as I almost automatically used Rogue and Wolverine before I realised that a) I had done that before and b) Marie, at least, has to be the base personality because she came first. rnrnTitties - sorry! Not sure if it's a cultural thing here, (I'm an Australian raised by Irish parents who spent a lot of years in the UK) but I wanted something that was a bit crude and raw, and "breasts" doesn't always cut it! What would you have used, out of interest?rnrnGlad you've had your happy ending with your older man - I'm certainly not denying that the relationship can work. The power issues concern me sometimes though (see one of the comments below). I've actually looked up the age of consent in the US at one point, and it's between 17 in New York State. That said, the age of consent is a seriously gray area for me - an age means nothing. For one 17 year old, sex can be a healthy, positive, natural thing. For another, it might be a travesty. rnrnOoh, deep thoughts. Might need to go and write some more porn ;)rn
Date: 01/25/2011 4:58:12 AM Title: Hearing
The alternation with their alter-ego's is very interesting! Also love the depth you give to the situation also making Marie a slave to her desire.
You seem to have all the ingredients for some great angst-filled, panties-wetting let-go therapy here darlin'... But something's telling me that there's more to it than just release and fluffy declarations of love, am I right?
Author's Response: To be honest, I'm not sure how this will end yet. Release, hell yeah. Lots of that. I can't see Logan DOING fluffy declarations, but I wanted this fic to be about them breaking out of the boxes they (and others) have created for them. That IS their happy ending; what they do with it I'm not sure yet. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2011 2:31:05 AM Title: Hearing
There are nerve endings in my body that have no business being this excited by something I just read on a computer screen. Sweet mercy, Jaq, you do have a gift.
'Exultant'. Great word. Perfectly captures the exact tone I heard in my head as I read it.
Besides the last line -- one of the greatest chapter-closers of all fucking time, if you ask me. >GAH!< -- my favorite was the following: "But just like the Rogue, (the Wolverine) was a chimera built by a million false assumptions and ill-considered expectations. Tonight, she was with Logan." Amazing description of the difference between them and their alter-egos, between the lie and the truth. And, oh, the truths he tells her...
Sorry if this review is sort of rambling, but those nerve endings are still buzzing and it makes it hard to think... --Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you, Wendie. My gift, I've been told, is for porn! I'm a writer and editor by trade, so yes, I'm very comfortable with the written word, but I'm happy to claim a very creative muse, who likes things (read: sex) to be confronting and sweaty and real and fun and revealing ... hence, I love writing Logan, in particular, because ... well, the feral is just the personification of sex, isn't he? Re exultant. Like you, I'm a word fan, and I like to use the right word, especially to sketch in the changing emotions etc. Exultant shows him moving from regretful to throwing himself into the experience. For which we are truly grateful. I'm glad you liked my chimera sentence ... I wondered if it was too pretentious, but then went ... naaah. So glad you enjoyed it all - and thanks for the wonderful, detailed reviews. They are gold.
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2011 12:46:57 AM Title: Hearing
A relationship between older Logan and younger Marie just doesn't squick me out. It should I guess, but it doesn't. I dunno how sick that makes me but I find it hawt as all get out. And this story has got me fanning myself already just wondering what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: I don't think it squicks out very many Rogan readers - but I feel a warning is necessary, just in case. My own feelings are a bit mixed; I don't believe a big age gap is necessarily an issue, but I think a gap in maturity, or simply being at different stages in one's life, can be. I think 17 can be quite vexed because most teenagers have been quite sheltered to that point, and they haven't yet gone through that glorious liberation of leaving home, being independent, and frankly, sleeping with lots of completely unsuitable men! And it disturbs me if that particular quality - being half formed - is attractive to an older man. But if its OTHER things that are attractive, well, I can work with that. Because, yes, it's hawt, hawt, hawt. Enjoy!
Date: 01/24/2011 9:42:30 PM Title: Hearing
Guh...whimper. Squeek? Th th thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: No problem. I enjoy leaving people speechless. Thanks for reading!
Date: 01/24/2011 8:44:55 PM Title: Hearing
Gahhhh... HOT!
Author's Response: Very warm here too. Must be global warming :P