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Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2012 6:59:07 AM Title: The Moonlight Key

OMG!!! What an awesome chapter! Ha! I should be sleeping... But I can't! I hafta read on!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2011 11:10:24 PM Title: The Moonlight Key

Oh, duh, Mistress Gold is Phoenix. No idea how I missed that before.

Favorite line:
The air about her beginning to tremble with something Stray didn’t have a name for. Something old and whispering-familiar and mean.

Author's Response: glad you're enjoying it. want to get back to the spookiness in the next chapter after the one just posted, so it was nice to be reminded of what gold's actually *like*...

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2011 4:43:08 PM Title: The Moonlight Key

It's really interesting. Not honestly I would normally get into reading but you've crafted a very detailed world and I'm very intrigued as to where you're taking it.

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2011 2:32:46 AM Title: The Moonlight Key

AMAZING! please, please, please update again soon, i'm dying to find out what happens next!!!

Reviewer: LaKinta Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2011 7:52:29 PM Title: The Moonlight Key

Ack! Noooes! I reached the end of this chapter so caught up that I failed to notice that the next chapter wasn't here! NOOOOEEESSSSS! I needs meh fix! Hurry up!!!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2011 2:25:41 PM Title: The Moonlight Key

Mysterious and interesting. I'm not entirely sure of what happened.I kind of like it that way too.

~Mia

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2011 7:41:09 PM Title: The Moonlight Key

Geez, I don't know how I missed that! That is very clever and a very cool twist! I'll go back and reread that chapter again. Please forgive my thickheadedness and thanks for clearing that up for me!

Author's Response: thank you- once i thought of it i had to do it, lol! glad you like the idea...

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2011 7:27:30 PM Title: The Moonlight Key

Evil cliffhanger! ;)

I'm still totally hooked on this and your updates can't come fast enough!

One thing has me a little stumped--I can't figure out who Gold is in the Marvel Universe. I'll have to do a little research. Hmm, it's not Carol, is it?

Author's Response: hey hun, good to hear from you. no, gold's not carol. sorry, i thought i made this clear in the second chapter: Gold and Red are *identical twins*. one of them is good and a doctor and in love with Scott Summerisle... And one of them is obsessed with Logan, can move things with her mind and occasionally has a shadow shaped like a masssive bird... oh, and she also hates stray... which character would that describe? ;-)

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2011 4:42:16 PM Title: The Moonlight Key

Very intense chapter. Enjoyed it a lot.

I am eager to find out what's going to happen next.

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2011 1:44:59 PM Title: The Moonlight Key

So many things, so many nuances revealed here so expertly by you, I am just overwhelmed!

I can barely function, waiting for the next installment of this beautifully crafted story.

Reviewer: RebelQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2011 12:44:49 PM Title: The Moonlight Key

SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!

I have been a little lost with what exactly was going on with this story but I love all of your stories here so I stuck it out because I knew I would eventually get it. Boy, oh boy!, am I glad I stuck it out. This is so good I had to reread everything because I am so exited with this! Please update soon.

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2011 12:04:41 PM Title: The Moonlight Key

Can I hit Mistress Red? Please? I’ll be quick and no-one has to know a thing! Just the once? it wouldn’t even have to be that hard (well actually, come to think about it, yeah it would and it would be aimed to inflict as much damage as possible, but again no-one has to know!) was going to call her a prima donna but first class BITCH sounds better to me. (Sorry just had to get that off my chest!)

Your imagination really is in overdrive on this one (in such a good way) and it’s great to read something so interestingly different. Roll on the next instalment cause I need answers to that slightly cryptic ending!!!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2011 12:09:54 AM Title: The Moonlight Key

Oh man! Cliffhanger!! I wonder if Ororo shot Mistress Gold or Stray. Your descriptions are so vivid I could see the entire scene play out before my eyes. Excellent

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