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Rogue gets a new hobby. Logan watching... with unforeseen consequences.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1311 - Hits: 3297
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/06/2006 - Last Updated: 11/06/2006
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 03/16/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Stalker

Hehehe.. jockstrapslapped... lol. That's just plain awesome.

Author's Response: Only when it comes from Logan though I think *g*\r\nGlad you enjoyed it!

Rogue has some relationship issues with Logan who is subsequently having relationship problems of his own.



Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 14740 - Hits: 31300
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/20/2006 - Last Updated: 11/20/2006
Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/29/2007 Title: Chapter 5: ....and watched him dress.

I really enjoyed your fic. You have great talent. I liked the dual Logan and how he has to find the middle line. Great ending!

Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/29/2007 Title: Chapter 5: ....and watched him dress.

I really enjoyed your fic. You have great talent. I liked the dual Logan and how he has to find the middle line. Great ending!

Just a friendly chat with the odd ogle between Logan and Rogue. Rogue's internal dialogue is a little disruptive. As if conversing with Logan about "preferences" hadn't already been distracting.

“Er…let’s just say mah mind was pretty corrupt even before everybody else moved in…and the part of you still in there is a bit flustered with some of that corruption,”

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 6899 - Hits: 15574
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/03/2007 - Last Updated: 04/02/2007
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 11/26/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Finale`

Hehehe... this story had me laughing so hard I almost peed. Awesome. Too funny.

Author's Response: thank you.

Rogue makes a decision that she believes to be uncomplicated. But a beast is awakened and she must face the consequences. Outside the safety of Charles Xavier's mansion, events are set into to motion that will change her life forever.

Rated: Mature
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 36762 - Hits: 128712
Complete?: No - Published: 01/06/2007 - Last Updated: 02/24/2007
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 03/01/2008 Title: Chapter 18: Steaming

Wow, I will definately be looking forward to any updates you have on this one~ I love how you're really dealing with Rogue's issues around her powers and even Logan. She sounds so confused and pissed off and ready to burst, it works wonderfully.
And how Logan feels towards her is really neat too. Not quite love or hate, but a million different strong emotions in between. And how he is disgusted with himself for it, but can't help wanting her. It's really awesome. I think that's probably how he would feel. It makes me think back to the scene in X2 with Logan and Mystique in the tent. And at one point she uses Rogue's form... and Logan looks sorta intrigued and grossed out all at the same time. And I think that's really it. I like it.

Your story is also really unique in how you're using the character voices and really giving a running dialogue of what they're going through. I think it really works well, and I wish you luck in continuing it.

"There she stood, covered neck to knees in a black leather coat and holding a magnum of champagne."

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2564 - Hits: 8340
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/20/2003 - Last Updated: 04/20/2003
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 03/15/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, this was short and sweet. I like the candid attitude Logan has at the beginning of the fic about not letting Rogue trick him into having 'A Talk' lol. Very cute, and I think, true to character.

Rogue tries to make her escape from the mansion but is caught by the one person she was trying to avoid.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3225 - Hits: 2743
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/14/2004 - Last Updated: 09/14/2004
Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/30/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, I LOVED that... I'm gonna read it again. What great angst. Sometimes it's better when things don't work out. I don't know why you were embarassed to post this. It is fantastic. Just the right amount of gut wrenching heart string pulling. lol. I know you said it's a one shot. But in case you've written a follow up story etc... I'd love to see that! Thanks for sharing, it was great.

Caught up in the movement against mutants, Rogue learns hope.

Rated: R
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2356 - Hits: 2517
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/27/2001 - Last Updated: 08/27/2001
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 03/15/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, this was so sad. And yes hopeful, but still so damn sad. I kinda want to read more to see what happens after. But it's good as a stand alone too, gets the wheels turning in my own head. Great unique story, thanks for sharing!

Logan can't seem to shake the memory of the girl he left behind.

Rated: R
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1784 - Hits: 2155
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/02/2000 - Last Updated: 10/02/2000
Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooo... gut wrenching. Just how I like my angst lol. Great piece, honestly. Good work.

Author's Response: Thank you! It\'s nice to know people still like it even though I wrote it over 7 years ago!

Co-Authored with Laenwyn.
“The spark that jumped and sizzled whenever he touched her was not in her imagination...and Logan had to feel it too. Those boundaries were going move alright, Rogue thought with a smile.”


Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, UST
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 60272 - Hits: 143937
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/20/2007 - Last Updated: 05/24/2007
Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/15/2007 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This is the second time I've read the story from start to finish. It really is fabulously written. And a great concept to boot! And my god... but it turned me into a traitor... in the end I totally wanted her to fall in love with Creed... how messed up is that.

There were a lot of really well written passages that were just heart-wrenchingly accurate and brutally honest. I felt like you guys really got Rogue and Logan's characters right. Their insecurities, secret desires, etc. And you kept the whole story intense and sexual, but none of it seemed over the top or unbelievable. Which is another feat in itself.

Most of the time, a story that is only based on the relationship tends to be kinda dull and predictable (and sometimes cheesy). This was absolutely nothing like that. This has to be one of the best relationship centered stories I've seen written.

Excellent work! A great read (both times!)

Author's Response: How did I miss responding to your comment??? So sorry.\r\n\r\nAnyway, thank you for reading. It thrills us when people enjoy what we worked so hard on and leave remarks. We really appreciate the feedback and I\'m glad we could get the story across without becoming trite or cheesy. :) Thanks again!!!

'All she'd ever needed was one night to really feel something, now all he wants is a second chance.'

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Dark, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 30
Wordcount: 89157 - Hits: 205277
Complete?: No - Published: 02/27/2007 - Last Updated: 08/12/2009
Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/25/2008 Title: Chapter 28: You Kill Me, And You Better Believe I'm Bitter

It occurred to me that I haven't done this story the justice of a well deserved review! Ack... so bad of me.

Your plotline is awesome. The extra characters are totally believable, and your Logan and Marie are so full of angst I might burst a heart valve reading this story again.

I'm a big fan of great opening lines, and your first chapter nailed it! I've read that chapter over a few times. Such a great set up for the rest of the story.

I can understand Rogue's bitterness, and how it is slowly poisoning Logan's affection for her. I hope they do manage to get back to good... but not for a while. The sexual tension between them is great. Interesting developments to Rogue's character too.

Great work all around! I hope you'll update soon!

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 04/28/2008 Title: Chapter 29: The Prodigal Daughters

You rock. Just like your update. And your Rogue. I can't wait for more (well I technically can wait, it'll just be unpleasant). Glad you're updating this one again!!

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 08/12/2009 Title: Chapter 30: Mean Streak

Hey,
Amazing update! You definately haven't lost it when it comes to writing this story. I love your Rogue. She's so messed up. And Logan, not messed up enough yet, he deserves more suffering. I hope you continue updating now!

Rogue has gone...rogue.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 840 - Hits: 1684
Complete?: No - Published: 03/10/2007 - Last Updated: 03/10/2007
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 09/22/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start to a fic. Hope you pick it up again some day!

An embittered, betrayed too many times Rogue, a Logan who loves her but can't reach her, that damn interfering Cajun, and sinister Magneto with plans for them all.

A story where it pays to be loyal only to yourself, and where power leads to far more than just glory.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X-Men Evolution
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Dark, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 44701 - Hits: 146641
Complete?: No - Published: 04/08/2007 - Last Updated: 03/03/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 03/08/2008 Title: Chapter 18: The World According To Rogue

Oooo, good update! I'm really glad you're continuing this story. It's fantastic! And the Rogan Romy tension is oh so good!! I hope she gets them both ;)

retired featured story After humans turn against mutants, Rogue and Logan find themselves trapped in a strange world in which they have no memory of a past nor hope for a future. Fate reunites them and now it's time to make a choice. Survival or freedom? Fear or love?

Rated: R
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 16366 - Hits: 2680
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/08/2001 - Last Updated: 01/08/2001
Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/02/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG - this story is so amazing. And horrible. And AMAZING! That was really fantastic. Thank you so much for writing and sharing that.

This follows the new "Evolution" series and is R/L friendly.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X-Men Evolution
Characters: None
Genres: Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 13844 - Hits: 3433
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/14/2001 - Last Updated: 02/14/2001
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 04/28/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Somewhat Damaged

Oh no, I hope you're not going to leave me hanging like this. You need to update asap! Great story so far!

Assassin Rogue is hired to kill Wolverine.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 26
Wordcount: 44168 - Hits: 227878
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/08/2007 - Last Updated: 08/18/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 02/02/2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Alone at Last

Another great chapter! Can't wait for the rest. I still love the dialogue you've got between the characters. And I like the way you're letting the story unfold at the right pace. (As in, Logan isn't instantly believing her, will need to see proof himself) Great job!

Logan seeks what he's missing in (on?) the arms of cheap women.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1630 - Hits: 2830
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/15/2000 - Last Updated: 08/15/2000
Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/17/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this piece a lot. Great work!

Uh... Rogue enjoys her self-defense class more than the other students do?

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Poetic Inspiration
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2838 - Hits: 3724
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/01/2007 - Last Updated: 08/01/2007
Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/27/2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Shirt

I have burst out laughing so many times reading this fic. And it will probably continue to amuse me for days to come. I loved the dialogue between Logan and the students. Jubilee was hilarious.

And this line: "...He roars as he grabs a long wooden stick off the wall. Shit, he’s gonna beat the hell out of us and me without my ‘I’m-really-Logan’s-favorite-so-nah’ card." Nearly made me pee. And that wasn't the only one. Awesome work. Loved it!


Author's Response: Yeah! Your review completely made me blush. :) I have to admit I\'m pretty proud of this story, I was in the ridiculous humor zone. Thanks! <3

Someone said they'd like a story with a love/hate relationship between our two favorite mutants and Rogue still with the Brotherhood. This is my take on that.


Rated: PG-13
Categories: Comicverse, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 10046 - Hits: 28958
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/14/2007 - Last Updated: 08/14/2007
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 01/19/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Kid.

This fic was awesome. Love-hate relationships are always the best. What's a fic without it! I hope you do add more to it.. even if the vocabulary doesn't expand from 4 letter utterances as you seem to think lol. I didn't notice it though.

Author's Response: You didn\'t? Gah, guess I\'ll have to go back through and stick some more in there. XP If any more does get added it\'ll probably be pointless foof.

A look into the relationship of Logan and Rogue, from friends to maybe more.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Foof, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 4852 - Hits: 12310
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/22/2007 - Last Updated: 05/17/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 05/18/2008 Title: Chapter 3: I turn to you

You've got a cute story here, and definate potential for expanding.

I do think you need to spend a little more time editing your story for typos and improper grammar. When those things are taken care of, it improves the quality of the story.

Good work, keep writing!

Logan and Marie meet post-registration.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 8933 - Hits: 12385
Complete?: No - Published: 08/28/2007 - Last Updated: 08/28/2007
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 01/01/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Arbitrum Liberum (Freedom of Will)

I know this story hasnt been updated in forever, but I wanted to say how awesome it is. I really enjoyed the read.

Moral degeneracy followed intellectual degeneration.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 24
Wordcount: 47000 - Hits: 180546
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/02/2007 - Last Updated: 07/01/2009
Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/10/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Lunatic Infection

oh my god... you are so cruel. I love this story. LOVE IT. And I was even thinking about it yesterday and wondering if you'd post more soon... and then you did!! YIPPIE!! BUT ITS SO SHORT ... Waaahhhh < that's me crying. I very badly need you to update this soon. As in ASAP! I'm dying to see some Logan interaction. I might just burst a valve somewhere in my body with the anticipation. Please keep writing!!

Author's Response: lol. You were thinking about me? *blushes* :3 Alright, I promise to update as soon as I possibily can but you\'re gonna have to calm down a wee bit, I don\'t have that much insurance. ];D

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 02/14/2008 Title: Chapter 10: Identity Issues

Well poor Rogue, how is she supposed to get rid of Creed? You're super amazing for updating so fast!! Whoot... allow me to throw a virtual party for you. Great job, I liked this chapter, and I guess you cleared up what that 'smell' was on her that he didnt like. I kinda like the image of her going after Wolverine with her bare hands... it was entertaining. Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks, I AM super amazing. LOL. :D I thought it was kinda dumb (her attacking him with nothing) personally but hey, what are ya gonna do?