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Reviews by Dita
Sometimes we get the balance wrong. Life is not about knowing the answers, life is what happens while you're looking for them. And the bad decisions? The screw-ups? They're what keep it interesting.


Rated: Adult
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 91223 - Hits: 318425
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/31/2008 - Last Updated: 10/11/2009
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 01/04/2009 Title: Chapter 15: Nothing in my way

Awesome update... well worth the wait while you defended yourself against evil Hawk people. I love Rogue's internal dialogue. It sounds quite natural, you've made her sound like a real person (ex. thoughts that end with nothing, run on thoughts, making fun of herself in her mind. It's nice to know I'm not the only one who does that). I have to admit, I'm looking forward to Logan's return (or Remy's entrance). Part of me wants Rogue to bolt before he gets there just so I can laugh at Logan. Anyway, good work, hope you get to write more soon!

Author's Response: Damn Hawk people... *shakes head, muttering curses*\r\nI love that you said Rogue sounds like a real person. I could hug you for that!! Thank you! That\'s awesome fb :oD\r\nAnd the next chapter\'s already on it\'s way. I\'m planning on posting it next weekend.

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 01/11/2009 Title: Chapter 16: If you can’t knock ‘em out, lie

"Which is crazy! And sensible. But crazy. And that doesn’t make any sense." *Points and laughs* I can't tell you how funny that sequence was for me. I'm still laughing. Pure mad genius at work. That followed by stealing a bike and "I have herpes!" Lol... that chapter made my night... but Logan's still a jackass.

Author's Response: I can\'t tell you how funny that sequence was for me. I\'m still laughing. Pure mad genius at work. LMAO - I loved writing that whole sequence because it\'s exactly how I\'d react to that situation. Messily *g* And yes, Logan is definitely still a jackass. A sexy jackass, but a jackass all the same.

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 01/18/2009 Title: Chapter 17: Regrets and phone-booths

Oh yay! More drama ahead!! And I was so worried that Logan and Rogue would be patching things up too soon. Bless Mystiques tiny heart.

Author's Response: \'And I was so worried that Logan and Rogue would be patching things up too soon.\' - Lol they\'re both far too stubborn to give in that easily! And yep. Lots more drama ahead!

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 01/25/2009 Title: Chapter 18: Once a Rogue, always a Rogue

Oh shit... how can you do that to your readers?! grumbles....

Author's Response: *lol* sorry. I get worse as well...

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 03/02/2009 Title: Chapter 22: Rebuilding the foundations

Yay update! I don't even know where I want this story to go... I'm so torn. And how awesome is it that Rogue was thinking of her Logan-self all these chapters later and it made me laugh all over again.

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 03/02/2009 Title: Chapter 22: Rebuilding the foundations

Yay update! I don't even know where I want this story to go... I'm so torn. And how awesome is it that Rogue was thinking of her Logan-self all these chapters later and it made me laugh all over again.

Author's Response: *lol* I think the Logan-self would be a hard thing to forget!

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 03/08/2009 Title: Chapter 23: Awkward conversations

Another stellar update. I am dying to hear what Logan has to say to Rogue. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! :oD I\'m hoping to get the next part up at the weekend.

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 03/15/2009 Title: Chapter 24: Maybe's and what if's

Gah!! I'm so mad at Logan! At least he can make up for it with this ride... I'm assuming he makes it better and not worse again.

Author's Response: \'I\'m assuming he makes it better and not worse again.\' *lol* I\'m giving nothing away....

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 05/31/2009 Title: Chapter 29: Same dance, different song

oh no! I'm at the edge of my seat! Don't stop there.

Man's hubris knows no bounds. A perfect example of this hubris was to think the "cure" administered to the mutant population would actually work. Life, Logan, and circumstances out of her control show Rogue that a cure is only as lasting as she wants it to be.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, X3, AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5941 - Hits: 3822
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/14/2008 - Last Updated: 09/14/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 09/14/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed your fic. I liked your Rogue, all sass and attitude. Well done!

Rogue returns to her past.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 10307 - Hits: 14290
Complete?: No - Published: 09/16/2008 - Last Updated: 05/17/2009
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 09/22/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, really awesome plot going here. I can't wait to see how Logan fits into it all and if Rogue can do what she's been asked (and how wrong it'll all go).

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like how it turns out! :)

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 05/18/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, this has definately developed really fast. I wonder what Logan will think when he catches up!

Rogue finaly returns home after being away for way too long, and finds things aren't what she expected

~~~~~~~~Means Past~~~~~~~~

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Character Death, Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked, Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 4433 - Hits: 13933
Complete?: No - Published: 09/17/2008 - Last Updated: 09/26/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 09/20/2008 Title: Chapter 2: The Welcome

I really liked seeing it from both sides. Gave a little more insight and background story for both characters. I can't wait to see the rest of it (from either viewpoint). Hope you write more... or it writes itself again hehe.

Author's Response: I didn\'t really want to have him explain things to her later on. While the first chapter took a few days for me to write, the second one just came out of no where. Thanks for the feed back, it\'s really appreciated!

Logan notices something odd about our favourite girl

Rated: G
Categories: AU, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Shipper, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1210 - Hits: 4258
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/25/2008 - Last Updated: 09/25/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 09/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Little 15

Oooo, a little dark? Maybe. Excellent? Definately. I really enjoyed this one.

Rogue wants Logan, but the new kid wants Rogue...

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1619 - Hits: 2823
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/02/2008 - Last Updated: 10/02/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 10/05/2008 Title: Chapter 1: John Has a Boyfriend

That was actually very entertaining lol. Easy to visualize hehe. Thanks for posting.

"That potential has stretched endlessly between us, things unsaid gaping like a chasm." Set 8 years after X1.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5709 - Hits: 5417
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/02/2008 - Last Updated: 10/02/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/05/2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Crossing

So awesome. That's all there is to say.

retired featured story An Alterverse version of our favorite couple. Inspired, sorta, by Terri Berri's "Naked Animal Guy."

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 12508 - Hits: 7580
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/24/2008 - Last Updated: 11/24/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 11/24/2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Lab

Damn.... what a great ending. And what a great story all around. I kinda hope you continue it... wonder how long Logan will wait to come back in this AU.

Logan finds more than he expected when he investigates Genosha.

Rated: R
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 8139 - Hits: 3268
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/24/2008 - Last Updated: 11/24/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 11/24/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Genosha

I have to admit that this fic turned out to be pretty funny despite starting off so serious. I like the image of Logan riding Rogue (and not in the dirty way). Too funny.

A call for help from the New Orleans Thieves' Guild takes Cyclops, Storm, Rogue, and Logan to the Big Easy, where things are not as easy as they seem.

Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Action
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 34242 - Hits: 3201
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/24/2008 - Last Updated: 11/24/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 11/26/2008 Title: Chapter 1: X-Cursions

This was a great story, well worth the read. Again, I am kind of hoping to see a sequel, or what happens next.

Logan recalls ten years of his life as an X-man, ten years of events and things that changed, leading up to the most recent, and best, change so far.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Action, General, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 12629 - Hits: 4618
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/07/2008 - Last Updated: 12/07/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 12/08/2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Only Chapter

Damn... I loved that. And I feel all gushy and happy now after reading that. I love happy endings. Great characterization in this fic... you did great.

Author's Response: Thank you. I tend to get obsessive about characterization, so it\'s good to know when I actually get it right, and I\'m glad this story made you happy.

Logan copes. Or possibly not.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1643 - Hits: 2036
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/21/2008 - Last Updated: 12/21/2008
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 12/21/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Most of the Time

Ouch... what a sad story. Brough tears to my eyes. Good writing.

It’s been a few years since X2 and things happened and not everyone’s where they expected to be. Logan’s world is opened up when he’s asked to help assist in the transportation of a special package.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2, X-Men Evolution
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 37
Wordcount: 57811 - Hits: 286140
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/27/2008 - Last Updated: 01/28/2009
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 01/10/2009 Title: Chapter 18: ‘Explanation leads to fruitless contemplation’

Wow, this story keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to find out all the secrets.. why Rogue and Logan split, what Rogue knows... how she's dead and alive again. Awesome... And there's Wanda. Yay! The story can't get any better. Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 01/11/2009 Title: Chapter 19: ‘Instinct is a blind man’s rule’

I love your speedy updates. I can't wait till Rogue's brain is off autopilot. This should be interesting.

Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 01/25/2009 Title: Chapter 33: ‘The drinks are a plenty but the smiles are still a few’

oh goodie! can't wait to hear this!

Logan and a somewhat more comics-inspired Rogue butt heads in Laughlin City. Adversarial strangers quickly become dysfunctional comrades.

Part one of the Dark Side of the Moon series. Same premise, different consequences owing to a treatment facility for mutants called Southaven and a focus on the chemistry between Logan and Rogue.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Dark Side of the Moon
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 12702 - Hits: 31500
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/31/2008 - Last Updated: 01/17/2009
Reviewer: Dita Signed
Date: 01/04/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Money, it’s a hit / Don’t give me that do goody good bullshit

wow, great start. I can't wait to see how you mix this up with the rest of the movie (or if you go in a totally different direction). I'm loving your characters. Good Rogue, much more comic book-like.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! It\'s a mix, definitely, and I hope you stay tuned. There\'s plenty more to go.