ah!!!! !!!!

Okay this review is for chapter 10 & 11- don't beat yourself up about 10 so much it was informative, I'm computer savvy myself and hey I've seen the inside of a few strangers e-mails ; ) yea the dork who couldn't figure out the < > codes, but I never knew that tid bit about the bluetooth thing- but I'd heard about it- thats interesting.

Also, you have an explosive vocabulary, you throw in these really sophisticated words and it really spices things up descriptively speaking. Such as:
saccharine, and sequestered, and inquisitiveness. Those are some of my favorites from Chp.10 but I equally enjoyed chapter 11 and pseudo, perusals
and rakishly-F.Y.I Logan grinning rakishly down at Marie- yeah just send someone with a mop to come clean me up b.c I was a puddle on the floor

Awesome-ness achieved and seriously I don't want to see Logan get hurt if he finds out Marie's plan- too bad so sad sorta deal- I LOVE THIS LOGAN usually I throw people cookies or cakes but I'm going to throw you a meat ball because it's brain food!

So take your hunk of meat and my praises and go! GO write another chapter!!!

Author's Response: 1) I don\'t know if i got the Bluetooth thing completely right--- i\'ve never done anything like that myself (honestly) but i think i wrote it pretty close to correct from what i\'ve read online. 2) thanks for all the compliments and the hunk of meat. haha. i would have preferred a hunk of Logan.... but yeah, i\'ll take what i can get. ;)

THATS WHERE YOU ENDED IT?!?!?!?

REMEMBER WHAT I SAID ABOUT NOT TRYING TO KILL PEOPLE?!?!

I'm going to go get meatballs and throw them at you! You just need to understand...you can't do that without warning a girl! Where's chapter 14-ahh!

Okay I'm breathing in and out breathing, I'm okay, everythings going to be fine ::whoooooo::

Okay, favorite lines in this chapter: I wanted to be her. Limp, on a bed, with perky nipples.

Other than that, again I LOVE your Logan I WORSHIP him-oh would you happen to know the name of the Chagall painting they saw? I'd love to see- your description really made inspires curiosity in the reader-hehe

Author's Response: thanks again for the feedback. i\'ll probably post 14 tomorrow. i don\'t want to post it any sooner because then i\'ll feel obligated to start the next chapter this weekend and, well, i need a break. even if it is only one day. haha.\r\n\r\nas for the painting, it is by Marc Chagall and it is titled: \"Traum der Liebenden\". which, loosely translated, means \'dream of the loving\'. to be honest, i\'m not a huge fan of Chagall\'s work but this painting strikes a cord with me and tugs at my heart strings. it\'s beautiful. everything around them--- the swirls, the bridge, the clouds, the tree, the flowers--- if you look close you can see countless images of faces and couples intermingled. Sigh.

"I sighed happily and fell asleep, safe in his arms."


AHHHH!!! I don't even have another word for it!!!! Wonderful balance between intimacy and pure mushy love! Hey now I was using that paper bag to breath again but it wasn't cause of shock this time! Whew! That was just like HOT and seriously what girl wouldn't want to be sharing Logan's massive bed! I get the feeling MR. Logan has more money then we've been led to believe oh but I hope he doesn't find one of her lists or something and find out about her plot with Bobby-even if it is so obviously discarded now

Love this chapter, love your writing, have a nice hiatus and come back with a rocking chapter 16!

Here have some chocolate chip cookies with reeses pieces! you've earned em!

Author's Response: hey... reeses are my favorite chocolate candy! thanks for the review, amanda. i\'m still nervous about the whole thing-- i don\'t feel like it came out quite right--- but maybe a lot of that has to do with the first time jitters. when i figure out what i\'m doing for 16, i\'ll try not to disappoint you. :)

LoL
It was so funny, when I saw you updated I hastily pressed on reviews instead of the link and I read that review below this one and all I see is "Logan stripping" and literally I went from o.o to O.O in point two seconds and attacked my computer trying to get to chapter 16

I can't believe this story already has 60,000+ words- you're doing a great job! Miasma, by the way, great word usage, especially when you plug into the rest of the sentence- lust cloud- niceeeeee lol can't wait for chapter 17!

.... really... I can't....c'mon now

Author's Response: haha-- i can absolutely understand your rush for fic after reading that line in the review. i\'m laughing just thinking about your comical reaction. :) and yeah, i can\'t believe this story already has that many words. did i ever have a life prior to writing this fic? the sad thing is this one isn\'t even finished yet and already i have more ideas for the next story...

::SIGH:: And now...the longest review ever....

"But I wasn’t insane. I was horny."

Its like 3 am and I just laughed ridiculously loud when I read this chapter- great scene.

Now, when I first started writing fanfiction it wasn't W/R so my first stories are elsewhere but I just wanted to say I know what you mean about posting for the first time and agonizing over whether or not the chapter will meet up to the readers expectations, and anxiously waiting for reviews and yada yadda yadda, but I just had to tell you- stop worrying! You're really good, impressive even when you consider this is your first W/R story and I have a confession to make when I read it was going to be a no powers story, I was like, eh : /

But this story blew me away and it blew everybody else away too- I mean you have so many reviews and it really hasn't been a very long time so they've accumulated pretty fast and you're doing a great job and I can't wait to read more!

I'm fresh out of baked goods, no time to bake, pre-midterm week ...blah-anyway I'm trying really hard to update.... and I started a new fic.... I know I'm going to fanfiction hell a place chuck full of unfinished stories and spelling mistakes and bad plots with phony dialogue but I cant stop writing L/R fanfiction...maybe I just need a life? lol

Anyway can't wait for your next update, anxiously awaiting!

Author's Response: 20 points to you for picking out my favorite quote in the story! When I wrote it i didn\'t think anything of it, but then i went back to re-read everything and i laughed at that candid Marie-thought. How much more succinct can one get?

\r\nthank you again for the review. i love the long ones, they give me more insight into what the reader is thinking. And I know what you mean about AU/no powers. I\'d be the same way. In fact, I am the same way but I did this fic anyway. What was I thinking?? O.O I\'m very greatful that I\'m doing something right, though, and that people are keeping the flames away! I am absolutely in love with this forum because of the people here (oh, and of course the plethora of great stories).

\r\ngood luck with your midterms. don\'t stress out too much. but remember that you\'ve got people here still waiting on more updates from you--- and what is more important? School or FanFic? I\'ll give you a hint: it\'s not school. ;)

OKAY

Let me explain something, recently I've been going about my daily life and entertaining myself by reading some stories on the old archive and I need to explain something to you.

THE ONLY REASON I'VE BEEN COMING BACK TO the new archive is because....drum roll please...I NEED TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER OF THIS STORY!!!!!!

I AM DYING!!!!!!!!

Literally, the doctors have come and gone, I'm having withdrawal symptoms and nothing can make me better!!! I've spent a hunk of my spring break reading and writing fanfiction and WHILE I'll be reading A WHOLE OTHER FIC I'll start thinking "ohhhh I wonder if something like that is going to happen in Stamp of Approval hmm.... can't wait to find out...."


EVERY TIME I come to this website, I'm a little hopeful and a little scared waiting to see if you updated! PLEASE! PER FAVOR!!! I'M possessed I'M STARTING TO SPEAK IN DIFFERENT TONGUES!

ADIO MIO!!!! IN DOMANI PATRI UPDATE!!!!! IMMEDIATEO!!!!

NO I DON'T KNOW WHAT ANY OF IT MEANS!

PLEEEEASSSE UPDATE!! I'LL GIVE YOU MY FIRST BORN CHILD!!! AHH!!!! JUST UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF ALMIGHTY GOD!!!!


::falls to the fall in exhausted panic::

Author's Response: lol. oh, amanda. my dear, sweet histrionic friend... how i adore thee. and would never wish death upon you. especially of the torturous fic deprivation variety! i posted a new chapter a few hours ago. Find the energy, fight the withdrawals and go read until you\'re better!
also, keep the kid. I\'ll settle for cookies instead. :D

anxiously awaiting chapter 21 Molasses Lady... : (

Author's Response: cute. real cute. =p

AHHHH!!!!! YEAAHHH!!!!!!!

I literally just finished writing chapter six of WYCF and I came on here to post it and I saw on that little side tab thingy on the welcome page MOST RECENT STORY: STAMP OF APPROVAL and I literally went ::GASP:: and jumped it like a Logan lookalike on the street.

Anyway it makes me want to cry to see this story come to an end! I can't wait to see you write more AU but remember you can always push out a quick one piece- I had a blast with "Revenge" and I'd love to see you do a L/M with powers just because I've grown so accustomed to your L/M.

Plus you blew me out of the water with this story I never expected a no powers fic to be this juicy and it really was just amazing, your talent and stellar writing abilites shined through on every line of this brilliant story. Besides stories where they have powers come with a lot of baggage- his nightmares her mutation yadda yadda yadd.

Really though-this was an epic story and that epilogue, which I'm waited for with baited breath over here, will be like Christmas! The best Christmas ever where it rains money and Logan and Marie smut lol-can't wait! I hope you go on to write many fabulous more L/M stories because I'm already anxiously awaiting them.

oh and OH OH OH lets please not forget about the possibility of sequels-those things only have massive potential! ; )

I read this story mostly to prove a point to myself and it was right on.


THIS is ridiculous- and I almost never flame stories- but seriously- It's Logan and Marie but just barely, you spend more time describing how Ms. Marvel "eats Marie's pussy while shoving a finger up her ass" then you do about anything Logan and Marie inspired. You don't describe anything concerning the two of them you just merely say "he was there five months and falling in love with her more every day" no other explanation and then you have two huge scenes describing Sarah and Marie and with a two line sentence of "It was a dare. Sarah -dared- him to make a move on Marie to see if she'd respond. Oh and respond she did." you start talking about Logan fucking Marie and Sarah with absolutely NO detailed description of how that event came to be.

Now A) I want you to realize I don't have a problem with gay Marie, it's actually kinda hot in certain aspects- like there's a great story written by November Tuesday which explores Marie with another women and that IS a great story.

B) I just want to say if I had read through this 8,000 word disaster and thought that you had skimped details on Logan and Marie because you lacked the ability to elaborate with verbal detail then I would hack it up to you being a poor writer and wouldn't bother com,plaining because you'd figure it out eventually yourself. However that's not the case, you're actually a semi-good writer and you don't need any help in the descriptive department either, and thats why it pisses me off that you posted this story here, which as I've previously stated scraps by as Logan and Rogue just barely and should really be posted on another website since it spends far more time describing Rogue and Sarah and only a little time describing Logan. Truly the entire thing is Sarah and Rogue and at absolutely no time is it stricly just Logan and Marie, you fast forwarding to a Marie whose pregnant after everyone dies and never mentioning anything about how or what is just another example of you skimping out of the Logan and Marie goods and you should really post this story somewhere that isn't a Logan and Rogue website.

I don't think your a bad writer but I do disagree with this story and I think you should throw in a warning if you intend to keep it up that this isn't going to be a story chuck full of Logan and Marie.

charle= telepath= that wont work- other than that I love your remix