Might be a prequel? MIGHT? Lady, ample good material here, listen tell ur muse I gotta gun and good aim! Maybe that will spook him into being "inspired"

Seriously though, all joking aside that is just my warped sense of humor threating your muse, not you in a haha kinda way not a "boom boom" kinda way- sometimes you have to clarify with gun jokes.

Anyway, yea definitely continue it because I'd love to read more. thanx!

Author's Response: Believe me, I have threatened and bribed him. Nothing works. In the past he was the regular blabbermouth, but now... He likes to take his sweet time with these things.

I lied. This story isn't retarded it's fantastical. Not just fantastic- but fantastical- the next level up!

Oh and I'm sorry about what I said about it being too shipper before, because I have to say my favorite part of this chapter was them in the parking lot when they're talking about who hit who where and whose blood belonged too who, that was shipper but in a great way.

This story is awesome and it was worth the wait, I mean hey thank god they finally got together and all but lol it was and is a really good story. can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: No worries manda-dee. I needed the nudge to move this stuff into the hot and horny arena! Next chapter, hope you like it rough ha ha! \r\n\r\nI have to admit that for some reason writing explicit stuff make me feel embarassed, even though there\'s no one here but me, which is why it\'s taken me 20+ chapter to get them to it! But they neeeeed to get it on so bad I\'m practically hurting over here. So I\'m working on the mucho overdue sex scene now and will post it tonight or tomorrow.\r\n\r\nMaybe I should practice my erotic writing and do some PWP for practice, loosen up the old smut muscles so to speak LOL!

Oh my god MORE!!!! Dude, fuck the gauntlet! The Gauntlet is like your normal suburban house and this is like...your fancy beach side mansion!!

Screw suburbia and come live at the beach!!

Seriously, my shitty analogies aside I love this story!!! Update soon per favor!

OH MY GOD!!! YEAH!!! I'm so happy you brought your stuff over from the old archive- I love this story!

I actually read it for the first time a million years ago when I first started reading rogue/logan fanfiction and then I rediscovered it, ironically enough, about a month ago.

never posted stories of my own until recently but since like 2003 I would read everything on the site and then come back to it every few months/years. And when I got back recently it was after the sites had been switched and even though a lot of my favorite authors were already here-ya know everyone who posted from 2003-I noticed a lot of good stories missing.


Lady you were missed!!! BUt i love this story and I'll cut this epic review short cause thats a lot of early morning babble

I love the idea of an independent Marie, someone who wasn't found by Logan but recruited by Magneto first-you really manage to balance her southern personality well with her angst and her personal trauma without making her sound emo/suicidal.

Running with the anti-emo sentiment I really love those few chapters in there where Logan is discovered as taking money from Xavier to hang out with Marie. It was a logical idea which you flourished with detail beautifully. You make it really easy to see the look on Logan's face and the pain that Marie feels you kinda feel too. I think it was realistic situation where he storms off because he hoped she'd figure out on her own the depths of his sincerity.

Now for the big enchilada, this current chapter. There have been many versions of the "Marie touched Logan and Logan gets his memories and madness ensures" scene. I would have to tip my hat to you in regards to this scene. Again, the detail was fantastic but what really made this chapter stand out as unique was the way you added Logan giving her a pep talk as she tried to make her way through the mingled memories. It was a refreshing touch to see an in depth struggle of her memories as well as Logan saying "you can do it just fight."

I can't wait to read the next chapter...oh and I love this title.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for the awesome feedback! I too love an independent Marie. In this story, it may seem that she is holding back a bit from the sassy southerner that she is, but it\'s on purpose. She\'s a ninteen yr. old girl who went from loving parents that ended up despising her, to being a part of the brotherhood, to now living in a home where no one really likes her. And on top of all of this, is a world that doesn\'t except her. Anyone who would go through that would be standoffish and not very confident. Don\'t worry, our girl will get there. The one thing I wanted to see in the movies, as much as I wanted to see Logan and Marie get together, is what it was like for Marie when she touched Logan. If she takes peoples memories and abilties then she had to have faced the Wolverine. Imagine having this killing machine in your head and yet having the man in there too. I wanted to show Logan and Wolverine seperate yet one in the same...LOL! It gets a little confusing when I try to explain, but I\'m so glad you liked what I did with it. And again thank you for pointing out the title, I totally missed that! LOL

I love you. I want to marry you and I'm not just a fanfiction digging hussy-like a gold digger only digging for stories not money- I have kidneys available for you if you ever need one. Seriously, just never stop writing!!!!

Author's Response: Hey thanks! Maybe I can sell your kidney to pay off some student loans? Or, you know, if you want to look into the marriage thing, Iowa\'s just a state over from me...(OMG IOWA IS MORE LIBERAL THAN CALIFORNIA, WTF? I\'m excited for the Midwest!) Either way, we\'ll talk ;D BTW, Squee-worthy reviews like this totally make me want to never stop writing!

LoL Thank God you got cracking on this!!! I was so excited to see this when I clicked on titles and so far It not disappointed me- I can't wait for the rest of it!

One thing though...dude I totally own a pet rabbit- not cool!!

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